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The Chapel

Posted on October 2, 2021January 5, 2024 by Susan Mannix

Hello and happy autumn! I know the season officially turned over a week ago, but there’s just something about October.

So, I did a thing. I entered in a (very) short fiction writing contest, just for fun. It was a bit last minute โ€” not even enough time for my critique partners to take a peek at it. Totally flying solo here. The Fall Writing Frenzyย is in its third year and garners entries from some incredibly talented people. Please do check out past winners when you have a chance. A million thank you’s to Lydia Lukdis, Ameerah Holliday, and Kaitlyn Sanchezย for this great opportunity!

I chose this photo to inspire my story. Or perhaps it chose me.

 

The Chapel

This time I stopped.

I had felt the pull of the little chapel before, but always kept walking.

A pew creaked as I entered.

โ€œMy love never came,โ€ a young woman in a trim plaid suit said. โ€œWe were suppose to marry today.โ€

I sat down next to her. The date on the Sunday service hymn board was todayโ€™s. Wednesday. โ€œHe didnโ€™t show?โ€

โ€œKilled in action.โ€

โ€œOh! Afghanistan?โ€

โ€œGermany.โ€

โ€œIโ€™m sorry.โ€

The woman got up abruptly. โ€œOne last wedding. I should get extra hymnals.โ€ She paused. โ€œAnd you should leave.โ€

Then she was gone.ย 

I took her advice.

โ€œLook what I found,โ€ Mom said when I got home. She handed me a photo. โ€œItโ€™s your grandparentsโ€™ wedding.โ€

A young couple stood on the steps of a small chapel. I felt its pull.

โ€œToday is their anniversary. The last wedding at that church. It burned down that night.โ€

I felt a chill and looked again at the picture.

Off to the side, a woman in a plaid suit was staring into the camera.

And at me.

I began to shiver.

โ€œWh-who is that lady?โ€

โ€œThe church secretary. She died in the fire. Legend says she started it.โ€

Not just legend.

(200 words)

 

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8 thoughts on “The Chapel”

  1. sunflowerscribe says:
    October 4, 2021 at 4:44 pm

    Ooh – this gave me the shivers! Nicely done!

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    1. Susan Mannix says:
      October 4, 2021 at 6:14 pm

      Thank you! I’m new at this genre, but had fun writing this!

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  2. romontanaro says:
    October 6, 2021 at 4:10 pm

    Great twist, Susan! Good luck!! Rosanna Montanaro

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    1. Susan Mannix says:
      October 6, 2021 at 9:37 pm

      Thank you, Rosanna!

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  3. wordwritermo says:
    October 7, 2021 at 9:46 pm

    Creepily done! Nice work! –Melisa Wrex @mowrex (Twitter)

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    1. Susan Mannix says:
      October 7, 2021 at 10:08 pm

      Thank you, Melisa!

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  4. Melissa-Jane Nguyen says:
    October 19, 2021 at 2:32 am

    Such a wonderfully creepy ending, Susan! It gave me chills!

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    1. Susan Mannix says:
      October 19, 2021 at 3:29 am

      Thanks so much, Melissa!

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